Archive for November, 2008

My Favorite Blog

My favorite blog is: Far From Falling

I chose this as my favorite blog because I found myself always going to this blog and commenting on it. The poetry is very easily relatable and very interesting as well. This person always had something to say about the poem and I was able to agree or build my own thoughts off of their reflection. There was a lot of Pablo Neruda, but thrown in were some very random poems that I hadn’t even heard of, but ended up liking a lot. I also love the song by Say Anything and the titles of the blogs were also great! This person did a great job throughout the semester and the blog really opened my eyes to some new poetry and poets!

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Right In Front Of Our Eyes

I Met A Genius

I met a genius on the train

today

about 6 years old,

he sat beside me

and as a train

ran down along the coast

we came to the ocean

and then he looked at me

and said,

its not pretty.

 

I think this is a very true poem. Bukowski has a lot of depressing poetry, but this one just seems somewhat simple and not depressing. He is describing a time when a 6 year old child was sitting beside him and how Bukowski himself realized that kids are so much smarter than we give them credit for. They arent smarter in the sense of math or life problems, but when it comes to the smallest things in life that are important and that adults take for granted, children notice everything and make a decision. Kids are also very helpful in talking about situations and are smart in that sense as well. The reason I titled this blog “right in fron of our eyes” is because we never notice how smart children are even though it is right in front of our eyes.

I also really like how this poem is only 1 scentence long, but it has so much detail and meaning to it.

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Intense & Strangely True

Dinosauria, We

Born like this
Into this
As the chalk faces smile
As Mrs. Death laughs
As the elevators break
As political landscapes dissolve
As the supermarket bag boy holds a college degree
As the oily fish spit out their oily prey
As the sun is masked
We are
Born like this
Into this
Into these carefully mad wars
Into the sight of broken factory windows of emptiness
Into bars where people no longer speak to each other
Into fist fights that end as shootings and knifings
Born into this
Into hospitals which are so expensive that it’s cheaper to die
Into lawyers who charge so much it’s cheaper to plead guilty
Into a country where the jails are full and the madhouses closed
Into a place where the masses elevate fools into rich heroes
Born into this
Walking and living through this
Dying because of this
Muted because of this
Castrated
Debauched
Disinherited
Because of this
Fooled by this
Used by this
Pissed on by this
Made crazy and sick by this
Made violent
Made inhuman
By this
The heart is blackened
The fingers reach for the throat
The gun
The knife
The bomb
The fingers reach toward an unresponsive god
The fingers reach for the bottle
The pill
The powder
We are born into this sorrowful deadliness
We are born into a government 60 years in debt
That soon will be unable to even pay the interest on that debt
And the banks will burn
Money will be useless
There will be open and unpunished murder in the streets
It will be guns and roving mobs
Land will be useless
Food will become a diminishing return
Nuclear power will be taken over by the many
Explosions will continually shake the earth
Radiated robot men will stalk each other
The rich and the chosen will watch from space platforms
Dante’s Inferno will be made to look like a children’s playground
The sun will not be seen and it will always be night
Trees will die
All vegetation will die
Radiated men will eat the flesh of radiated men
The sea will be poisoned
The lakes and rivers will vanish
Rain will be the new gold
The rotting bodies of men and animals will stink in the dark wind
The last few survivors will be overtaken by new and hideous diseases
And the space platforms will be destroyed by attrition
The petering out of supplies
The natural effect of general decay
And there will be the most beautiful silence never heard
Born out of that.
The sun still hidden there
Awaiting the next chapter.

-Charles Bukowski


I got the idea to use this poem because my friend told me it was his favorite poem when I asked for a suggestion of what poem to use. I had no idea that it would have such an intense meaning and be so strangely true. I began reading it and right off the bat it takes a somewhat disturbingly true outlook on life. There are so many things we have no control over, no matter how hard we try and no matter how much we do in life to make this world a better place. It’s a harsh world out there and the second we’re born, we’re born into everything that happened prior to our existence and all the descrepencies are placed on our shoulders; we have no say in the matter. The poem gets more and more gruesome and more and more intense as it goes on, but it still holds a very true aspect to it. One part in particular that I found extremely true and maybe somewhat humorously true (in a depressing way) is:

“Born into this

Into hospitals which are so expensive that it’s cheaper to die
Into lawyers who charge so much it’s cheaper to plead guilty
Into a country where the jails are full and the madhouses closed
Into a place where the masses elevate fools into rich heroes”


It’s so very true that hospitals are ridiculously expensive, lawyers charge far more than is needed, and the jails are full and some of those people don’t even deserve to be there. It’s almost sickening how true to life Bukowski is and yet this poem is written so expertly with class and elegance and is so easy to relate to. The style that it is written in starts off introducing the reader into Bukowski’s view of life then slowly builds up by saying “Born into this…” followed by 2-4 worded lines, then building up to longer lines, then shutting down to “Born into this..” and having only single-worded lines follow. I think it’s ingenious how he wrote this poem. It’s inspiring as well as depressing, but most of all it really makes me think how maybe as a whole, we can improve this world so that the next baby won’t be born 

“into a government 60 years in debt

That soon will be unable to even pay the interest on that debt”

I think that change is possible, but strength in numbers means more than ever when it comes to such big changes. I can’t say I have one favorite line(s) of this poem, because each one touches me in a different way and makes me think so much. I truly love this poem and every part about it. I love how he ends with “The sun still hidden there/Awaiting the next chapter. There will always be another chapter and I love that he ended such an intense and strangely true poem with a few lines of inspiration. Bukowski is an amazing writer and thanks to my friend, I am intrigued to read more of his work.

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Be Yourself

 

you shall above all things...    
  you shall above all things be glad and young For if you're young,whatever life you wear it will become you;and if you are glad whatever's living will yourself become. Girlboys may nothing more than boygirls need: i can entirely her only love whose any mystery makes every man's flesh put space on;and his mind take off time that you should ever think,may god forbid and (in his mercy) your true lover spare: for that way knowledge lies,the foetal grave called progress,and negation's dead undoom. I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance  EE Cummings      I stumbled across this poem one day and found it very intriguing. I had to read it a couple of times to get more and more understanding of the poem & still I'm not sure I fully understand it- input would be much appreciated. What I do think about this poem is that Cummings is trying to write encourage ably; to teach a life lesson of being oneself is the best that you can be. I think that it's so very true. The best thing in life is to simply be yourself and be all that you can be. Cummings is right in saying that "you shall above all things be glad and young/For if you're young, whatever life you wear/it will become you; and if you are glad / whatever's living will yourself become." because if you really want to be something, it's yours for the taking and your environment will be what you learn and how you come to be. I think it is very true and very meaningful; it teaches a great lesson and I would love input from anyone that has a take on the poem. It makes me think about who I want to be & who I really am. I think it’s very inspiring and it made me want to read more of his poetry.

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